Perdita Arc 2: Tetra City Kerfluffle Words

Chapter: Arc 2: Tetra City Kerfluffle Page: Words

_{6th Jun 2020, 11:00 AM}

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6th Jun 2020, 10:56 AM

liokkamillie

Extra page today because I finished another one UwU

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6th Jun 2020, 2:14 PM

VelvetRainbow

The reading layout of the second panel is very awkward, I would recommend in future instances that you don't split up your text boxes in that way. Instead, if you still wanted to have text boxes on both sides, you should treat them like they're separate pages of a book, so you read all the left text box first, and you then move to the second. I hope I could help!

6th Jun 2020, 2:16 PM

liokkamillie

Yeah, it was something I was trying and forgot to change before I exported it as a .png :'3
It looks really bad and it's not something I'll be doing again XD
it'll absolutely be changed when I update this page

2nd Jul 2020, 2:24 AM

Just another person

I wanna see Keena just rapping really inapropriately, that would be amazing.

2nd Jul 2020, 12:21 PM

liokkamillie

Keena's not really a rap kinda person hehe